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chris72
June 23rd, 2006, 03:48 PM
Today I maket some portrets of a romanian sculpture, his name is Les Daniel.
I wait from you any sugestions,
Thank you
Linda G
June 23rd, 2006, 07:19 PM
Chris,

Not that I could do any better, or near as good but I find the halo in the first one distracting.

I love the mood of the images and don't mind the lack of the far eye in the first one, it just adds to the mood.

Nice work!
Bill C
June 23rd, 2006, 07:32 PM
I particularly like the tone and overall 'mood' of the 2nd one. Not the standard pose, especially with the eyes.
Regards,
Bill
Igor
June 24th, 2006, 12:44 AM
#1 is very good (though I agree with Linda's comment on halo).
#2 could be better if the model looked at us IMHO.
chris72
June 24th, 2006, 01:35 AM
#1 is very good (though I agree with Linda's comment on halo).
#2 could be better if the model looked at us IMHO.

Thank you for your comments, I try to repair the first photo, I don't like the halo too. Igor what is IMHO?.
Igor
June 24th, 2006, 02:25 AM
.... Igor what is IMHO?.

I = in
M = my
H = humble
O = opinion

Meaning it's just my opinion, you should disregard it if you find it inappropriate :)
Camarochas
June 24th, 2006, 06:00 AM
Chris,

I think you're on the right track. I also think you may want a little more light in the eyes; and fix the halo. I like the warm tone. I think it works well with the subject. The pose is good. You've got a great subject to work with. If I were you I'd make sure I'd get to shoot him again.

Charlie
BARBARA LUKE
June 25th, 2006, 03:19 PM
I think #2 would have been a great shot if he would have been looking at the camera....... love the moody look iit has .......... Barbara
chris72
June 26th, 2006, 02:46 AM
some changes
BARBARA LUKE
June 26th, 2006, 03:12 AM
Hi Chris .... Now #2 i like... .......nice work.. Barbara
Linda G
June 26th, 2006, 06:00 AM
Hi Chris,

Now that it's larger, the one with him looking away from the camera shows the neck in focus and his face blurry. When it was small, I didn't notice but now it's distracting. I still love the mood.
rekhon
June 26th, 2006, 08:51 AM
i like the number 3 best, i think that shoulder would of look better if still in focus. Mai pe romaneste mi-ar fi placut ca doar fundalul sa fie in ceata!
Linda G
June 26th, 2006, 08:55 AM
Nu, nu, nu!

English so we can all learn, or a page to tanslate. Guido must ahve a good one for German, do we have one for Romanian?
chris72
June 26th, 2006, 11:44 AM
Nu, nu, nu!

English so we can all learn, or a page to tanslate. Guido must ahve a good one for German, do we have one for Romanian?

Hi Linda,
what you meen "nu, nu nu!? please explain :(
Linda G
June 26th, 2006, 11:50 AM
I was being a mother and telling Rekhon no, no, no to his Romanian post.

I'd love to understand it!
rekhon
June 27th, 2006, 12:17 AM
my bad, i was saying the same thing i sayd, i would of liked the model to stay up from the background, with a little more view of the back shoulder. It was that thing eith the model poping out from the background... escuse me about that!
Linda G
June 27th, 2006, 05:49 AM
O,

You're allowed! I was just frustrated that I couldn't understand. I honestly realize how wonderfully you speak, read and write English and how lousy I am at your or any other language. Of course, because of you and your friends/family/countrymen, I DO know how to say thank you. (I just tried to spell it and gave up. It's not spelled as it's pronounced.)